Writing 1 (short e-mail)

Activity #1

Reflection #1

I needed to obtain more fluency in writing. I observe some several grammar inconsistencies. Not every part of this first writing activity was a completely mess, for exmaple writing the correct structure and reaching the objective of the response are two good points in favor to consider.

The structure of the mail was really good. I belive I didn´t have any trouble with that. By other hand the porpuse of the e-mail eventhoug it was succesfully reached it doesn´t offered any complexity. The porpuse of the report was reached only by making questions of the needs. 

I understood that I needed to structure my ideas in a correct way in order to improve my English writing. So I decided to practice more and more mail writings in order to improve my English fluency.